After I returned home from school that afternoon, I discovered my cute cat, Kitty was lying unconscious at sitting room. I am shocked and I decided to help Kitty. While helping Kitty, I remembered that two days ago, my neighbour was fed Kitty with leftover food. Since that day, Kitty was not well. I might that Kitty had a common illness just the rest that Kitty had before, but I am wrong.
I pulled myself together and remained optimistic that Kitty can saved. I quick as a flash brought Kitty to vet. When arrived there, the doctor vetted Kitty with a sad face. He said Kitty ingested too much poison and Kitty passed away. He also said sorry because he could not safe Kitty.
After I heard that news, it make me sad. I was feeling blue after Kitty gone. My parent try to cheered me up and wanted me be cloud nine again. My parent also offered me get another new cat. I appreciated their kindness but how I can replaced Kitty that had been five years with me? I really loved Kitty and no one can replaced her in my heart.
After a few weeks later, I companied my friend, Zafi to a pet shop. He wanted to buy a pet for himself. While watching the variety of animals at there, I realized that a Persian cat similar to Kitty. Its size, its colour. Like a twin of Kitty.
I picked that cat up and it licked my face. The manager offered me with affordable price and I immediately decided to buy that cat. I took Katty, my new cat to my home.
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What an interesting essay. Felt sorry to the owner because lost her beloved cat.
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Firstly afiqah, we doesn't call 'ruang tamu' as sitting room but as 'living room', if I'm not mistake. Second, pay attention when you are writing an essay that had happen.
E.g : 'made', not 'make'. Okay, my friend?
That's all. Till then.
okay. thanks for the advice. =)
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